13.1.12

crows

in the black fragrant leaves
between tall eucalyptus trees,
shiny feathers, beaks
parted, calling
so loudly to each other
I look up

3 comments:

Lorelei said...

I can see and hear them so clearly from this short piece, Carla. I love it. Crows are a bit of an obsession with me. cheers, Laura

Barb said...

Black leaves and crows - I like the absence of color amid all the sound. Nice!

carla said...

Thank you both for commenting! Laura, I didn't know that- have you written about crows? I'd love to read it!

Carla