I will help you remember
what clean smelled like
she said it was when
you came home and
the washing machine
was chugging, whirring
with bleach and soap
in and sunlight
streaming hard and
fast and you walked
into her yellow
into her yellow
kitchen
3 comments:
I love the phrase and the response in this one, and the senses did come through loud and clear! I love that clean smell, and it was more a scent of childhood than of today for me, so lots of nostalgia too.
Best,
Laura
Thanks Laura! I've tried 3 times to reply to this, but am having trouble. In any case, I wasn't sure if it worked when I wrote it, but am glad you liked it. Cheers! Carla
having trouble leaving comments, that is....hope you're well. C
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